Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Although environment serves as a shelter to a majority of living beings, at present, we are facing a huge deterioration of the nature in terms of reduced number of species, abating wildlife and barely surviving plants. However, this is not the prime concern of our time because it cannot be controlled, there are many other environmental challenges which are even more critical.
Extinction of numerous species of plants have decreased the usage of plant products in ayurvedic medicines as well as natural colors obtained from them. Similarly, the drastic animal extinction is also indicating a threatening sign for the wildlife species as the chances of predators to find their prey decreases significantly which in turn damages the predator’s vitality and further increasing the loss of animals.
Apart from the above perspective of environmental problems, there are other major problems that the planet earth is facing. First of all, global warming is attributed to cause majority of problems, one of them being the melting of ice like from the northern regions of the planet increasing the vulnerability of coastal regions of get submerged. In addition, the rise in pollution have made the air quality unbearable especially in the part of metro cities having a dense population.
In my opinion, the belief of the first group of people is quite futile because forests and wildlife cannot be controlled by humans, in fact it is solely controlled by the mother nature. Hence, one thing that the humans can regulate is the rise of pollution and the severe threats caused by artificial creation of machines/technology causing the deterioration of environment which might improve the unfortunate fate of living beings facing the challenges to survive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, similarly, so, well, apart from, in addition, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28928571429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02016817683 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7783625699 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.555555556 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121727485878 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503717541483 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570234643088 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644952784829 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253181390552 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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