Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The major cause of adverse environmental effect in the contemporary world is the loss of biodiversity, some people argue that, while others may believe it has several significant reasons. In my opinion, though extinct a specific group of plants and animals is one of the cause for climate change, there are various human created issues that play a crucial role to change nature.
Firstly, Human being intended to make deforestation and logging for urbanization and these are the causes of climate change. These are also caused by extinct biodiversity, which keeps the harmony of ecology and protects people from several pollutant particles. For instance, a survey says that country with dense vegetation keep their people healthy and long-lived. In this way, loss of specific kind of plants and animals are the reason for climate change.
However, I opined that there are more significant environmental problems today. Such as contamination of air emit the carbon footprint from industry and vehicle is a severe environmental problem in an urban area. Similarly, a natural disaster like drought, famine and the flood is happening for global warming. Moreover, through hazardous waste to the ocean makes the water table high in coastal areas. To illustrate, some environmentalist says that, most capitalist countries build skyscrapers through deforestation which makes more severe environmental hazards.
In conclusion, though the loss of some specific species of nature is risky for the environment, some people believe this, however, others have some valid reasons, which are more liable to mitigate the climate change during this time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88183268614 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0979482551 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262906842242 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887942058041 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766982757457 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16408287312 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600215426444 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.