Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Technology has revolutionalized the methods of shopping across the globe by introducing new techniques and terms such as online shopping. some hordes believe , the onset of the technology in the field of retailing is certainly a positive change, however, some have a different perspective for this radical and constructive change. online shopping has an abundance of benefits for peopple regardless of their age and abilities.
To begin with, one of the most significant advantages of shopping from home by using a screen is the convenient and ease to the people who can,t fgo to supermarkets, especially during pandemics. For instance, amid COVID infections period, The vulnerable people, largely the old aged or the one with high care reqiuremnets were ensured security and safety from this contagious diseases owing to online shopping. Secondly, it saves time and money along with fuel spent on cars or public vehicles as such people people sitting at home can buy whatever they want can access the home delivery.additionally, people while sitting in australia can easily check a store of any other country across the world. Lastly, it provides more opportunity to have a look at the accurate review of the product before buying it .for example , after going to a local shop and supermarket, buyer can't ask from the other customer about the product, but on the online retailing websiites , an individual can easily go through the reviews.
On the contrary, online shopping has obvious reasons of critism as the quality can;'t be evaluated online, by just surfing through a website. for instance, many times online shopping sites like Ebay, Amazon,The Club Factory and many more have become a centre of attraction for delivering entirely different material than that of shown in the photos on the websites.Similary, deliveries, sometimes take more than the expected times. It is quite immpossible to try the dress or taste the food item while sitting in front of a computer screen. last bu t no the least, the hygiene related concerns are completely in the hands of delivery driver, for example in some incident, videos has gone viral where delivery driver had shown eating the food item before the delivery.
Taking into consideration all the arguements, I uphold the flag in the favor of technology that has shown unprecendented potential changes in the methods of shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17616580311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97663509029 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598445595855 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2428796981 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.5 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116476988427 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423224846159 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249852283048 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669481779316 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292696803647 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.