Some people say music can connect people in different cultures and ages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Music is known as a communication method of humans. Therefore, some indicate that music can bring people together regardless of their cultures and ages. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement.
Music can help people comprehend others despite their cultures. Providing they have the same zest for music, they can understand and interact with the person next to them, though they are different in nationality or mother tongue. For example, modern music festivals like Tomorrowland attract thousands of participants from every continent in the world; it is also a chance for strangers to become friends because they share the common interest in digital music. As a result, more people are taking part in this annual and international occasion to make new friends and dance together to the astounding melody.
Besides culture, this essay believes music plays a key role in associating people in different generations. This means with music, youth, elderly, and even adults can show their enthusiasm in some particular things, especially citizens of a country. Take the national anthem as an example. When natives listen and sing along to this song, they all feel patriotic and take pride in the nation in which they are living. Moreover, other types of music like folks are used to bridge the gap between parents and their descendants, as they are lessons that former people want to teach their heirs.
In conclusion, all types of music are clearly capable of uniting people. While contemporary music erases the difference in cultures, traditional helps remove distance in ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68430724231 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0696500375 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229451319821 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847771336261 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697954014585 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150859393919 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523541532648 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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