In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
While many argue that governments should allocate substantial funding to exploring planets like Mars due to the threat to human life on Earth, I strongly believe that these resources could be better utilized to address current societal challenges.
On the one hand, expending money extravagantly on space explorations could end up wasting the precious money, which could be better spent otherwise on the saving environment, improving health care and education. This means that when millions of dollars are spent on projects like finding water on Mars then such projects get failed sometimes. Had
this money been used for recycling water on earth and reducing chemical release into the water resources like oceans, rivers and lakes, our earth would have more fresh water and a clean environment. Moreover, allocating money to build infrastructure and improve medical researches of the health sector would have been better for making society healthier and to live with better health care services such as medicines and vaccines to cure many ailments. What is more, education sector is in a dire need of a huge investment in many countries and that can make more and more people literate, leading to better job opportunities to earn their livelihoods. Having educated people means that such societies are more likely to be sustainable, crime-free and overall progressive in general.
In contrast, some people might argue that many researchers dream to unravel many unsolved mysteries of the universe whether it is understanding the black-holes, finding myriad galaxies and other planets having life possibilities.To quench this thirst of exploration, it is not an erroneous task to spend a significant amount of amount of money on the space findings.For instance, when one such space program launched by ISRO India succeeded a few years back to find water on the Mar.Even, the Indian ISRO team got accolades for creating hopes among people to have one more habitable planet than the Earth.
In conclusion, although some people contend that the money being invested on space projects is very worthwhile to find a life on other planets like mars, I restate that the money should be allocated appropriately to uplift our world on many different levels like environment, education and health-services
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32054794521 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87314063986 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567123287671 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.942328788 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.777777778 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.5555555556 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275653436337 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115112765892 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376673472397 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146551543507 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384846613603 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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