Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Since the ancient ages peoples life has been accompanied by the music and it has been part of the celebrations or the sad events. An opinion exists that music is something which can reconcile people and make them closer to one other. I completely agree to the above mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
Firstly, music brings people together in different communities and interest groups which are associated with it . Humans create accounts on the social networks or on the forums to find people who like the same groups, songs, artists. Often such meetings take place in real life and visitors share their feelings about the concerts. For example, according to statistics provided in the internet poll, majority of participants consider that it easier to find a common language with those who like similar music. Thus, melody is not only a relaxation for the ears but also a reason to construct a new friendship.
Secondly, due to the love for certain music public create bands and then unite even more fans. Initially, future performers are inspired by some genre of songs, learn to play instruments, find accomplices and this is how groups are based. If new musicians become popular, they are beginning to inspire a new generation to create something unusual. For instance, popular in 80s and 90s group Nirvana pushed dozens of fans to produce their project . Hence, It shows people that it is possible to ensemble for music and achieve something.
To conclude, music not only fuse humanity into a fan community for it also encourages people to unite for a common goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97769516729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60901005303 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.0789461437 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205547746763 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068080633832 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723605805027 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119202687123 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406235517381 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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