Undoubtedly, it plays a crucial role in every life, eliminates distinctions and differences among various cultures and generations, symbolizes harmony, and reflects people's company. I cannot disagree that this kind of art helps everyone from any place and at any age together.
To begin with, the main reason that excretes the hurdles among various nations and ages is everyone enjoys the music from anywhere in the world due to not only it is the mirror reflecting people's feelings, but it also has its own stories behind the melody. Besides, music does not need interpretation to be enjoyed and comprehend as it touches our hearts and resonates in our minds. No matter what language we speak or understand, we appreciate the melody and the depth of music, which is why people of all ages can gather together and listen to this non-color picture. Additionally, nations influence each other with the music they composed and the instruments they have, and as a result, this amalgamation removes cultural differences and brings people from numerous countries and ages to a common platform. Taking this as an example, the music genres we enjoy nowadays might have originations from many cultures, and all individuals from those listen and enjoy them.
Music is an art form enjoyed by all, which helps reduce the gaps among people. Like when the national anthem is on, children, adults, or elders all tune the same emotion, which is patriotism, and their unity is greater than ever. Furthermore, music can also evoke people's feelings such as sadness, love, and so on. In addition, some music genres are loved by all, who divinely harmony into the common atmosphere.
To conclude, I cannot help but say that music, as a universal or supreme art form, enriches our lives and strengthen our relationship, regardless of our background, knowledge, and age, as a celebrity once said.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7489644252 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3915780647 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236214410792 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808297524614 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530939846465 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125521644239 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461915329231 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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