Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
these days, movies play a integral part of our life's. However, some people prefer watching movies on some electronic devices, whereas some argue that watching movies in theater's is better. I personally feel, watching movies in theater is much more entertaining. this essay will try to explain as to why movies are better at the theater instead of phones or tablets.
Firstly, enjoying the movie with friends and family is much more enjoying and fun. what i mean by this is that, movies are supposed to be watched at multiplex's and cinema halls with good quality speakers to enjoy the feel of the movie. often, these are not felt on watching them on the tablet's or mobile phone's. For example, the movie rambo cannot be watched on phone's or tablet's because it is a film of action which cannot be enjoyed on the smaller screen.
Secondly, watching movie's on a smaller screen may affect your eyes. this means that, multiple hours of viewing movie's on a smaller screen can affect your eyesight. For instance, many people who workon smaller screen's often end up wearing spectackle's and even suffer from severe headache. Hence, keeping everything in mind we can say movie's are enjoyed better at the cinema's .
To conclude, i would like to can say that ,movie's play a integeral part of our life's. But watching them from a safe distance and with proper feel is very important instead of watching it on a tiny screen and ruining your eye's .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79116465863 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35813498812 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0632173058 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2142857143 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169482989641 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640008636564 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675078248215 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103812111193 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514410730299 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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