There is a debate whether the sole reason to learn foreign language are for preparing us to travel or work in foreign country while others argue that those are not the only reason. I completely agree with the latter view and will explain the reasons.
On the one side, having to travel or work in overseas country require people to master nonnative language. This is because, all of people's daily activities, ranging from buying transportation ticket to communicating with other people involve using language. Hence, if people do not understand the language that is used in the overseas country, they will find difficulties in doing their activities in that country. For instance, Judah came from United States to Japan for solo traveling purpose. Because he already learned basic Japanese, the language that is mostly used in Japan, he could do daily activities in Japan without having much difficulty. However, having to travel or work in overseas country is not the sole reason of people in studying foreign language.
On the other side, there is a lot of advantages that we can get by studying foreign language even when we have no plan for traveling or working in overseas country. Firstly, being able to speak in overseas language will help us understand other things easily. A study has found that a person who is bilingual and trilingual understand new things easily than person who only knows how to speak in one language. Secondly, people who can speak in other country's languages will make wider circle of friends who come from other countries. In this modern era, people can befriend with other people from another country easily. By understanding their language, people can connect and communicate with them in an easy way.
In conclusion, learning overseas language when we have to travel or work in foreign country is beneficial because it will help people to do their daily activities in overseas country because all daily activities involve using foreign language. However, this is not a sole reason for people to learn foreign languages because there is a lot of benefits that we can get by studying foreign language, such as helping us understand other things easily and helping us to make wider circle of friends who come from other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01322751323 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5762808857 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425925925926 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.584802233 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30555392984 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119079695978 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107508071825 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250022750041 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09032262421 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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