Learning a foreign language may have different reasons in people's life considering different perspective. Some people believe that learning can only be useful if we are going to work in that language or traveling to a country where people speak that language, while others say opposite. In my personal view, I believe that there could be a number of reasons to learn a foreign language if giving a thought beyond travel and work.
On one hand, many people travel these days for work related commitment as work is beyond borders now and internationalization of businesses is still in progress. Although learning a new language and commanding it to communicate well is not everyone's cup of tea, employees are open to learn a new language as it enhances their profile and help them nourish their career as a good candidate. It has been found in a recent survey that employers are preferably looking for candidates who have at least basic understanding of more than one language. Indeed such an expectation is fair because it has become need of the hour.
On the other hand, We ought to accept the fact that only work and travel can not be credited for motivating people to learn a new language. There are many intentions and factors associated with adapting a new language in one's life such as : understanding a foreign culture or studying in any local language. Students are coming out of their shells and exploring their career opportunities worldwide. There is no doubt that by learning a local language they could be enrolled in one of the renowned universities and colleges. Furthermore, e-commerce has enabled occupations to expand across countries. Not just this, even contents on such websites are available in multiple language to target more and more consumers. Hence, language localization is adapted as per the country's locale to provide rich and useful information in most familiar way.
To sum up, I want to reiterate that learning a foreign language could benefit anyone in a number of ways, hence it would be injustice to say that foreign languages can be used just for work or travel. A language is followed by a well known and rich culture to explore many intrinsic benefits.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ociated with adapting a new language in ones life such as understanding a foreign c...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting a new language in ones life such as understanding a foreign culture or study...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, at least, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86756756757 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82409671914 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 370.0 20.2975951904 1823% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1801.0 106.682146367 1688% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 370.0 20.7667163134 1782% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 116.0 7.06120827912 1643% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407327971896 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.407327971896 0.084324248473 483% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269393467818 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117354521289 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 186.5 13.0946893788 1424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -304.07 50.2224549098 -605% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 147.6 11.3001002004 1306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.53 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.0 10.1190380762 1482% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 187.0 10.7795591182 1735% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ociated with adapting a new language in ones life such as understanding a foreign c...
^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting a new language in ones life such as understanding a foreign culture or study...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, at least, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86756756757 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82409671914 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510810810811 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 370.0 20.2975951904 1823% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1801.0 106.682146367 1688% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 370.0 20.7667163134 1782% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 116.0 7.06120827912 1643% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407327971896 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.407327971896 0.084324248473 483% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269393467818 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117354521289 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 186.5 13.0946893788 1424% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -304.07 50.2224549098 -605% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 147.6 11.3001002004 1306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.53 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 150.0 10.1190380762 1482% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 187.0 10.7795591182 1735% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.