Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
some people believe that juveniles should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old but some people has opposite belief. they believe that it is very important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
Indeed, it is important to go to school at young age. There are a plethora of benefits of it. in young age mind is in developing phase and ready to learn new things. primary education of a young one's can only be conducted at young age only.
if a child has spent 6 to 7 years of his/her life playing at home, it is very challenging for him to join a school and to spend 5 to 6 hours at school. part of his/her mind already has been developed and it is going to be a tough task to teach everything which could have been done earlier.
Even though, if a child started to go to school at early age, he/she has decent amount of time left to play and enjoy. At the age of 6 to 7 years, a child has completed most of his/her primary education and is ready to learn something more challenging and appropriate to his/her age.
managing time is the most important lesson of anyone's life. it can change someone's life if implemented in a proper way. it is a key to success. we all learn this important lesson in our young age only. we all learn to manage time between school and playtime. if anyone find it considerably tough then he/she has plenty of time to re-learn it.
Although it is very important to play, education is also part of our life. one should embrace the idea of joining school early in life. school is not just about the education, it is a place where we get ready to face the upcoming bottlenecks of out life and it is very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36222910217 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39578478155 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8701991088 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1578947368 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21052631579 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315719048503 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975071901226 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139300586489 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192397313205 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232985510038 0.056905535591 409% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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