some people say that too much attention and too many resources are
given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree
about this opinion
It is commonly argued that protecting wild animals and birds is drawing a great deal of concern and resource of society. In my opinion, I totally convinced with this point of view.
There are several reasons why I think people put too much attention on the protection of animals. The first reason is that many non-governmental organizations have been established so as to conserve animal throughout the globe. Nonetheless, they are too concerned about animal-related activities in many parts of the world. For example, it is absurd that WSPA, a world society for the protection of animals, denunciated Justin Mendes of using dangerous animals in his music video for commercial purpose while he did not. Furthermore, news about wild animals can be spread rapidly on the internet, especially social media. If a certain animal species, such as elephant is imprisoned somewhere, this news would be widespread on social networks such as Facebook on a massive scale immediately.
In addition, people have also been spending too many resources protecting wild birds, especially those being threatened. Firstly, a great deal of money is funded to carry out any project to preserve wild birds, in which infrastructure and research are the two most expensive. The more difficult research to conserve the DNA of those animals is, the more it costs. Secondly, the expenditure for this protection is quite redundant to some extent. while funds should be raised to lift the living standard in some regions, the investment in bird protection appears to be lavish spending.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both concern and resources are focused too much on the preservation of wild animals and birds in this modern and age.
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93500817021 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4622393437 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363895502185 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120477850543 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812172938102 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224511890905 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028303516166 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.