Some people say that university student should pay the full cost of their education. Other say that university education should be free. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Add relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.
One of the most controversial issue today relates to student’s university education wherein it is being argued by some whether it has to be free or should be paid in full. In my opinion, education has to be financially planned either by the student or the person responsible for them. In this essay, I am going to examine this argument from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, it is generally acknowledged that acquiring higher education and appealing credentials requires a reputable university for a student to attend to in order to gain superior knowledge and experience. However, it would cost the students an arm and a leg to apply in this institutions because not only that they require initial high grades they would also require an enormous down payment for the fee. Thus, dissenters argue and stand to their perspective that education must be given to anyone for free. I believe that schoolchildren should not be exempted by these instead they should be responsible for their personal benefits because studying is a choice and it is something that they have to invest to their selves in the future. In addition to that, there are plenty of ways to sustain their studies. For instance, being employed while studying can be an option for those who supports their own.
On the other side of the argument, I think that education has to be paid in full by those who are accountable for the pupils. Also, people should have to be flexible enough to utilize other options to pay for these matters. Furthermore, the government should order a program wherein scholars can apply to get the full cost of their education for free. In addition to that, a vast amount of options for educational plans for the citizens must be implemented in order for education to be attainable for everyone. A particularly good example of this is in the USA wherein they offer a program for universities “Study now, pay later” and it helped a significant amount of people even for the foreign immigrants who are willing to study abroad.
in conclusion, being able to study does not have to be financially complicated. In my opinion, studying in a university should initially be financially planned and not to be given for free.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191283292978 0.247107183377 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.186440677966 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0726392251816 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0556900726392 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0556900726392 0.0437548338989 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138014527845 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0403226058552 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82153512735 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0605326876513 0.0326793684256 185% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00242130750605 0.00163938923432 148% => OK
Determiners: 0.0992736077482 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0290556900726 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00726392251816 0.011925033212 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2237.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 383.0 316.048096192 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8407310705 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334203655352 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266318537859 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187989556136 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1227154047 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153512735 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469973890339 0.56093040696 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.769706223 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9375 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0993421013 49.517814964 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.8125 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.5693537859 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.27642276423 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26632094204 0.332605444948 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131051729642 0.102741220458 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0680296392556 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595918700456 0.534860350844 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134306537695 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125299378365 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583247524563 0.0742795772207 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.418244760425 0.324371583561 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105684699285 0.0638462369009 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190210970806 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410155921377 0.058150111329 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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