In this modern era, the life of every person became very hectic. As we know husband and wife are two wheels of life chariot, that's why a necessary balance is required for them so that life carriage runs correctly. In this essay, some people argue that a couple must share the household responsibilities. I am personally inclined to its favour.
Firstly nowadays, it is the reality that, without the work of both the husband Wife, the needs of life are not fulfilled. Today's modern world multinational companies spread everywhere and work time is not steady in these companies.so it very difficult for a woman to work in the office and chore individual.moreover it should be compulsory if a woman earns for her family so husband responsibility to help to her in domestic work like helping hand in cooking, washing, cleaning and bringing up children. Because a father is also equally responsible for children's caring and nurture as a mother.
In contrary, it has became a social assumption that only the women responsibilities to do the work in the house.on the other hand, men feel contrary to their masculinity they help to women in households activity
To encapsulate, if man and woman both are full time employed, they should share their responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95098039216 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16963983536 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.6126444451 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180772677446 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769569569011 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981223099957 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180772677446 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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