Some people say that youngsters should take part time job while study in University. Do you agree or disagree?
Any body of human assume that the teneegers at least spend the time to find job beside study in college. I totally agree with this notion and think that every single person at college should be independent by working.
first of all, can make the person more confidence with their abilities. In other words, sometimes human think that they are nothing abilities to do something and make they shy with theirself until in one moment they think that can't to contend with another people because their confidence is nothing. Whereas, through worked as part time in crannied of study capable to increase the feeling of their self and fill their experience until one day if they are have a nice job will be better than for the first time. For Instance, average of students at college in Australia have a side job such as witers, admin in market shop or another job, after the graduates they will easy to find some best job for their life and because of their experience that will make their ability more than high level. Thats why side job ise very important for students because it is can make their more confidence with their self.
Secondly, that will help the financial. When students have a feeling that their money was a bit they will visit some platforms on the internet to find side job. Furthermore, they will apply their resume to the company and waiting for calling, therefor to rising their fare of life because majority of students think that should be independent until they can buy anything what they need without announce their parrents and they reliase if their requirement at college is very plentyfull and sometimes expensive and hence they decide to be independent person by working. Thus, taking oppurtunities through working at some company can make what they need being come true.
To conclude, every students should be thinking about the future and determining what is the best job that can make their life more than happy and comfortable and don't make the life more intricately.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ife more than happy and comfortable and dont make the life more intricately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, at least, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81104651163 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35161123032 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7918319414 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115712396862 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538089899647 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382467731681 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813070114124 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337637652782 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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