Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently.
Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Seeking advice from friends and family when considering a job has been widely chosen by many people. However, others believe a personal decision about this matter should be given with no restriction to improve individually. I believe people can absorb others’s advice as it eventually makes one’s decision more precisely.
On the one hand, forming a career’s path requires a large amount of assumptions to go to the final decision. Parents and friends are reliable sources of advice that are based on each individual’s characteristics since they understand abilities that each has on the other. In addition, the line of parent’s responsibilities on their children and a strong relationship between friends will enhance the outcome quality and therefore secure advice, making it more trustworthy. Taking advantages of knowledges from family and friends will absolutely provide more idea
On the other hand, as individuals have their own perspective and self- esteem, giving out a personal decision also helps them to build up their confidence. It is also considered that people are the only ones who understand them as their abilities change according to characteristics. A choice based on conjunction of abilities and skills is absolutely better than the one with no consideration. It therefore can make people value their work as creating more inspiration.
In conclusion, youngsters should make decisions on their own but it should be considered carefully based on family and friends’s advisers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47435897436 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16610142942 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7939793573 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197310126408 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734029545566 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481988878291 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11305576429 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349726715795 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47435897436 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16610142942 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7939793573 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197310126408 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734029545566 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481988878291 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11305576429 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349726715795 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.