Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, modern cities may be beautiful. Some people feel that these cities and towns should be designed, but others consider that their purpose is more vital. This post will look at both sides of the discussion and my points of view.
On the one hand, beautiful downtowns are chosen by a large number of visitors every year. It is undeniable that people are attracted to beautiful things. As a result, the aesthetic and immersive look of contemporary buildings and their architecture that were designed as a showcase attracts people. To illustrate, Venice, Italy has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world due to the poetic canals that run through the city.
On the other hand, I greatly agree with the idea that functional cities are more important than the pretty ones as it sets the backbone of the economy. To be more specific, a well-functioning city will provide full amenities for its people: vehicles, houses, schools, office buildings, amusement parks, etc... are arranged purposefully and for the convenience of the residents. These cities, without a doubt, offer better long-term benefits than well-built cities. Moreover, multi-functional cities often attract businesses and companies to invest and develop, which can later help create a beautiful place.
To conclude, while beautiful cities might help a country earn foreign currency, functioning is the most important element for a country. I believe that if the city were practically organized, it would consequently help the entire nation's improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hand, beautiful downtowns are chosen by a large number of visitors every year. It is undeniable t...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
..., it would consequently help the entire nations improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35510204082 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91739958265 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2120920659 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318254655503 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886208554371 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885991009986 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176054074802 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116312075187 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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