Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
There is no doubt that the digital era benefits people in many aspects. By which, there is an upward trend that people keep their personal and private information on online platforms. From my perspective, I consider this phenomenon to cause more harm than good.
It is argued that the decision to save data online enables hackers to lead through wide gaps in technology. For most people, especially those who are not computer experts, the idea of posting data on the Internet can help them access it easier. However, there are inherent risks when personal information is given out and sold to companies. There is no question that people nowadays are often disturbed by advertised calls, messages or emails which are only known by their acquaintances.
In addition, it is even worse when some people keep their bank accounts or addresses online. They can become victims of some scrams or appropriations of property. For example, they can feign as bank staff and send fake links that help them withdraw money easily whenever someone clicks on that. Furthermore, by taking advantage of technology for some simple tasks, such as storing information, it makes people too dependent on and reduces the fexibiliy. It means people spend more time on digital devices, which has some consequences for physical and mental health, including: myopia, disease related to backbones or lack of social communication, etc.
To recapitulate, although technology brings a variety of advantages for human life, it also hides some risks that normal people cannot predict. So I strongly reckon that the trend of saving private information online has more drawbacks that have detrimental effects on personalities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32592592593 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88328992094 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1234454391 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27617390883 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965677361689 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812672526142 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155284402151 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045325215522 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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