Some people thin that robots are very important to human's future development, while other think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the whole world are undergoing juggernaut technological advancement comprising with automation and robotics. Amalgamate reviews are revolving around the world whether robots are useful for future development of human or not.firstly, I shall discuss both aspect of robots and give my opinion.
there are myriad number of benefits attached with robots. To begin with, the principle advantages of robots is cost. Robots are cheaper than human counterparts so that cost are still decreasing. Moreover, robots are more familiar with perilous places. In other worlds, human cannot work under hazardous condition of workplace. A fantastic example of this is, NASA sent robots to profound study of mars instead of human are not working under low pressure and gravity.
Furthermore, robots can be more precise, accurate and speedy. Size of robots are also positive point. Robots are available in market with diverse sizes. What is more, automation, one type of robotic system, which works on binary program so that machines are indulged in their work and completed before time collapsing. As a result, productivity of organisation is escalated owing to incessant of work.
On the flip side, golems are not human in terms of intelligence. Robots, are working only on computer programs, have not mind to handle different social situation. Additionally, lack of emotion is ramified human and computers. Hence, automaton, with this limit, cannot help and interact with society. Finally, jobs are paramount disadvantage of robots. Job vacancies become abate. This rate is intricately link with crimes and violence.
To conclude, in my opinion, having both positive and negative side of robots; robots are used only under welfare condition and places where accuracy cannot achieved by human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4928057554 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78248280284 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651079136691 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6818432944 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7142857143 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169311929779 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442585519158 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485145253057 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101788258623 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043627709672 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.67 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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