Some people think that advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, advertising is one of the important role for spread information in the world. many people argue that advertisement should be created for measure all age group, especially for children. I partially agree with this statement with relevant example.
First of all, many ads are running in television, which ads is not beneficial for children. it can be seen that many sex related advertisement is not possible to show children. For example, nowadays many condom company publish their advertisement in all channel, it's not useful for children. Secondly, many chocolate and biscuit advertise is watching in television in regular basis, due to that many children are addicted to this for daily routing life. As a result, many diseases are started in children in small age. Overall, because of the advertisement, children more addicted to chocolates and biscuits in daily life as well as many ads do not create for children.
However,many ads is important to publish for all age group such as many government advertise is useful for learn basic rules and regulation. For example, government of India are telecasting ads related to road accident for learn about how to drive vehicle. Apart from this, many ads are available for spread right information to public. As, Parle company creating their product right information for consumer's health. All-in-all, many government are sharing an ads for reduce accident and many company spread information relating to their product manufacturing information.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding advertisement, as far as I concerned that both view are equally important as watch ads for the basic rules and regulation as far as some ads are respected for watch to children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28472222222 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01151980621 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7855628254 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106604837035 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515605720147 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503427967095 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079915059935 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550082315153 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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