Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Other say that in this way children are under pressure.
discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is certainly true that education is the most powerful weapon which one can use to change the world. Many parents argue that children should mandatory doing their educational activities in their leisure time, whereas other think that leisure period is only time for children to doing other co-curricular activity. This essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
The first and foremost reason why many parents think that doing education activity in student's leisure time because students spend more time on education activity which can help to improve their subject. For example, Times Of India carried a survey of Government exam topper daily activity before their achievement and informed that almost 90% topper spends their leisure activity for education purposes. Moreover, students can easily more focus on their weak subject. This can be seen that many scholar students are doing more education in their free time for improve more and more their education.
On the flip side of coin, other believe that leisure time is not created for their educational activities. Firstly, students can spend time for different activities as drawing, sketching, playing a game, use laptop and many others, which can help to know their own interest in particular field. For instance, Sachin Tedulkar is one of the best sportsmen in the world, he become a famous person for doing more time in their game as cricket. Apart from this, leisure time is only time to students try to new activities as playing new game, watching television for inform about new information. It can said that leisure time is only try new activity except education activity.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding their leisure time, as far as I concerned that students learn other activity in their leisure period, because which can help to their interest as well doing different types of activity these period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...or inform about new information. It can said that leisure time is only try new activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23322683706 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53704700356 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482428115016 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0235135173 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319155905143 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136825738594 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888445444218 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232753645044 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561381310039 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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