When new towns are planed, it is important to build more public park or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people has less time for spending behind recreational activity. Many people suggest that public park and sports facilities will be more created than shopping malls, but I partially agree with this statement because both are equally important in human life.
To begin with, many people suggest that park and sport facility is important to built in the future. First of all, due increase of air pollution, it can be controlled by creating more plants in park as well as garden as a result we will face clean air and reduce pollution. For example, Berlin city created more park and garden in their properties, which reduced air quality index and manage air pollution. Apart from this, sports centers are only place where any person can learn different sports activity as cricket, badminton, swimming, tennis, sketting, volleyball, football and many others. This types of games is essential role for people's skills in generally children. For example, Government of Gujarat created a sports ground in district level, which can help to explore student's skill.
On the flip side of coins, Shopping malls also useful place for students. Firstly, nowadays shopping malls is one of the place where all sort of item easily carried in one place as grocery, clothes, sunglasses, shoes and many others. Due to this reason more people argued that to built new shopping center for people can easily carry their shopping in this place. Secondly, teenagers are mostly spend their leisure time in shopping malls for inform about new collection of their regular items as clothes, movies, snacks and many.
In recapitulation, although there are contrasting view about built new shopping centers as well as public park and sports facility, as far as I partially agree because they both are equally important in future as reduce air pollution from creating more park/garden and improve skill for doing different sports in sports grounds, but shopping malls is important for buying different things in one roof.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in general, sort of, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14626865672 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50461102948 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.388491259 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339097825855 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124556573979 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810349258793 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225238693334 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478787320233 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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