Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. Why do you think this happens? Is this positive or a negative trend?
It is certainly true that with the rapid development of technology, people are attracting to buy grocery product from malls and online. In contemporary era, people are more alluring to buy new product rate than local shop. This behind many reasons will be explained below with assisting example. In my perspective, I think that this is a positive development for buyers.
To begin with, why people are more preferring to buy from supermarket compared with small shop. Firstly, this types of supermarkets provided different types of product below to one roof, such as groceries, clothing as well as dairy product are available in particular one place. For example, Reliance Mart, D-mart and many other provided in their stores. apart from this, this store not only sell of our nation products but international products are available. As many international brand clothes and shoes also available in big shopping malls. Overall, supermarket are provided different types of variety and not only sell of domestic products but also available of international products.
I personally thinking that this types of development has positive impact for buyers because this malls provided different types of offers as consequence consumer spend less money in supermarket compare with local shop. apart from this, buyers can carry all types of shopping in particular place as clothes, shoes, groceries, dairy products and many others. All-in-all, people spend less money for their products in supermarket and it provide different category.
In recapitulation, I explain that people are more attracting to supermarket from local shop because it gives a different product in one roof and available as domestic and international products, which beneficial for buyer to carry their item in one place with cheapest price.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
... For example, Reliance Mart, D-mart and many other provided in their stores. apart from th...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...nd many other provided in their stores. apart from this, this store not only sell of ...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... has positive impact for buyers because this malls provided different types of offer...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apart
...in supermarket compare with local shop. apart from this, buyers can carry all types o...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...or their products in supermarket and it provide different category. In recapitulation,...
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Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the cheapest'.
Suggestion: with the cheapest
... buyer to carry their item in one place with cheapest price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, apart from, for example, i think, in particular, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3851590106 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87643795196 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487632508834 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.45707478 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237747253823 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984568938623 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656765058402 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16336634637 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426378250472 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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