Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe that this would benefit both the individual and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that young people have to work as a volunteer and this can surely benefit for both individual and society in general. However, I do not agree that therefore we should force all the teenagers to do unpaid work.
On the one hand, most young adults are already under high level of pressure with their studies at school without being given added responsibilities for working in their spare time. This is because School can certainly be seen as a full-time job that students need to work hard to do homework and pass the exam with a wealth of knowledge. Therefore, when young people have free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it learning some new things to help them enhance understanding about the modern new world. They have many years of work ahead when they finish their studies so any reason would be given to require them to do volunteer.
On other hand, I do not believe that society has nothing to gain from obliging teenagers to do unpaid work. First of all, I contend that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to compel young people to do something that they unwilling to. By doing this, they are actually doing more harm than good and it obviously against the human right which is one of the most important factor to constitute a develop and modern society. Besides, this can lead to objection among young people, who would feel that they were being taken advantage of and parents, who had a right to raise their children.
In conclusion, I believe that nobody is forced to volunteer because those base on awareness and voluntary and it would be counterproductive to make all teenagers to do unpaid work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the most important factor to constitute a develop and modern society. Besides, this can l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63787375415 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49885129402 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9996243405 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469681842653 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178672026708 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697930519005 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287067654488 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540139112664 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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