Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this 21st century, university students play a vital role for the country, they are going to lead many important sectors in few years. Some people think that, they ought to have freedom to select the subjects whatever they like. Others, however, consider that, they have to be only allowed to study those subjects, which will be benignant in the future, those attached with Science and technology. I will discuss both views before coming to my opinion.
On one hand, the foundation of any clever country is its education system.It is sine-qua-non for all the citizens to be educated. All people different interest of study in various kinds of fields. All students have dissimilar dream professions : some want to be an Economist, Historian and many more. it is essential for pupils to choose the subject, which they want to learn, if they study unlike subject, it might affects the career. For an example, if students want to be savant in one particular subject, so, study that subject not other subjects, if they learn other subjects without any interest, they might get fail and demotivate, which gains the possibility to stop study.
On the other hand, the technology has been being accelerated by leaps and bounds in all sectors and world is becoming modern and technical. If students study only those subjects, which are related to science and technology, it increase the chances of getting better job with high salary and get opportunity to work in a nation also in abroad with other people. It is very fruitful for country, if it only allows the learners of educational institutions to study in technological subject, it assists to get name and fame. For an instance, one of the countries - Japan, where the subject of science and technology is necessary to learn for all students, where children make sime gizmos by themselves at their home and now, it is well-known as technical nation around the globe.
In my opinion, science and technology related subjects have more opportunities of getting a good job vis-á-vis other subjects, also chance to work in fortune five hundred companies.
To conclude, it is necessary for learners to learn interested subject to be silent in that field but the technology is developed in all sectors so subjects of Science and Technology related help to get better position and chance to be a well known person or country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97236180905 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68959918018 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505025125628 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1118467125 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407128601515 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143696368593 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662680858337 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224557353836 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102961611971 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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