Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
What the university students should study is a controversial issue in the contemporary life. Some people believe that students should be allowed to choose the subjects they are interested in while the others think that studying topics in science and technology are valuable for the future. Both points of view will be analyzed in this argument before the reasoned conclusion is found.
To begin, the university is the place which builds adept generations and country leaders. From this point, the university policy will affect the whole nation. The expert opinion when the students are given the freedom to pick up the majors at the university level, this would make the education more effective. The student will read more on this topic and take a lot of courses to be a leader in this field rather than being a worker for the office. For example, Basant Nour El-dein, a famous tour guide who always had a passion to study Tourism and Hotels. This passion motivates her to be creative in displaying the information about the ancient Egyptian monuments and make it into an interesting story for the public.
On the contrary, as we live in the globalization era, the whole world focus on the science and technology. The universities focus on teaching science related subjects and obligate students to study to yield a workforce for the country. Although, apparently such policy is so efficient for the future of the society, actually it creates imbalance and increasing numbers of leaders in fields than others. Moreover, if the students forced to study uninteresting subjects, the number of dropout students dramatically will be increased.
To recapitulate, However, there is a debate on whether the students should study at the university level, I agree with giving the freedom for them to choose the subjects have more benefits for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08524590164 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73613187359 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8002666384 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346972110515 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117605134133 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111174124562 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229753926216 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149926177174 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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