Some People Think That Allowing Children To Make Their Own Choices Is Likely To Result In A Society Of Individuals Who Only Think About Their Own Wishes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there are some arguments about the two ideas of whether adults should let their children decide what to do by themselves or not. Although these opinions have its own reasons, I, myself think that we should allow our kids to choose the solutions in their own issues.
Why did some people say that parents should make decisions for their children? The reason is that children do not have enough acknowledge about the matter happening around them. For example, nowadays many under-teenagers are addicted to technological devices, so they can drop out of school easily if their parents do not do any methods to prevent them. Moreover, it is better to show adult care to kids, especially when they meet unfortunate situations. That is why individuals prefer giving advice than allowing kids to do freely.
In contrast, there are also some advantages that make others think in another way. Firstly, when they self-decide any issues, their parents directly promote them to think more independently. Take courses at school as an example. Children should be learned the subject they like in order to study will all passionate and become more successful in the future. Besides that, when they know clearly the core of that situation, they will have the ability to resolve and avoid the negative effects of problems for themselves.
To sum up, with all reasons about benefits and drawbacks of these two-side arguments that be mentioned above. I still believe that children should be more responsible for making choices in the problems which influents to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, for example, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08560311284 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61337278839 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9752098796 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248898340087 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809078727336 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07858860483 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150850595793 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876368179623 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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