some people think that animals should be kept in men made cells, while other people disagree with it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a highly debatable issue whether animals should be kept in manmade cells or not. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with the idea of keeping animals in cages by looking at both views.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of zoos. First, zoo plays an important role in wildlife conservation. Extinctions of wild animals are alarmingly rising these days, environmental organizations need effective measures to protect those animals. By keeping them in a protected environment, zoos help to conserve endangered species. Second, zoos are uttermost places that allow biologists and environmentalists to study animals and their behavior. Rather than spending hours in the brutal environment of forests, scientists are exposed to animals without any difficulties and it will lead to invaluable researches later on.
On the other hand, there exist a number of demerits while keeping animals in zoos. One of the most vital disadvantages is the artificial environment. It is extremely unethical that zoo animals are kept in very confined areas compared with their vast natural habitat. In this environment, animal would lose their instinct for survival like hunting for food. Moreover, caged animals are more likely to suffer from fatal diseases when they have to live in unnatural space. Another noticeable drawback of confining animals in cages is the aim of making money. Zoos exhibit animals in order to attract millions of visitors annually, and we have no right to make a good profit on exposing animals to people for entertainment.
In conclusion, while zoos have their own benefits, I opine that the demerits would outweigh their merits because of the artificial environment and the unworthy profit.
- writing task 1 11
- The environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 84
- The environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 67
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 90
- Some people believe that schools should only teach children subjects which are beneficial for their future career and therefore others subjects such as music and sports are not important.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 40
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31868131868 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94525084545 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7333614545 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157342213909 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482593555447 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475172201093 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958048502983 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693519221104 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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