Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, owning an academic degree from an institution is essential for achieving success in life, while others argue that a university degree is not important to be successful. From my point of view, learning methods from university lays the foundation for a better future and professional qualifications.
On the one hand, getting experience or doing anything that you like leads to becoming a successful person rather than gaining a university education. Some people pursue ambitions and learn some substantial skill they want, which helps them to achieve their ambitions. For example, Cristian Ronaldo, one of the best soccer players in the world, also does not have any academic degree from an institution, while he has endless efforts to follow his desire. Therefore, professional qualification is not a reason that hampers people to create a respectable career.
On the other hand, applying to prestigious establishments can assist citizens to achieve their goals because comprehensive education can not be found in any place. In fact, the environment of universities has well-known professors that not only provide students with this advanced knowledge but also act as guidance to assist and give vital advice. Besides, coordination skills, leadership, and management qualities, which are essential parts of being a success, the excellent experiences students could witness when having a high-level education.
In conclusion, while high-level education is not the only path leading to success for citizens, I maintain that education comprehensively plays an important role in shaping and directing students, leading to a greater career afterward.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62948207171 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13404798776 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9657740603 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166178417189 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596394668255 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300953610094 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911040145921 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236088988581 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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