Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The general view has been that the development of the minimum driving age is the best solution to intensify road safety. I disagree with this idea due to the importance in the other methods which should be taken into this account as well.
On the one hand, it can not be denied that increasing the minimum age for getting a driving licence bringing about the effection of road security. In fact, the older people make quicker and wiser decisions to avoid dangerous situations reusulting from matureness and life experience, compared to younger drivers. For instance, my father never uses his phone when driving since he know that he could easily lose concentration leading to an accident. Furthermore, if raising the minimum friving age is enforced, it will allow teenagers to have more time to improve their driving skills. They can attend defensive driving courses to learn how to deal with different friving circumstance which produce the diminishment of the risk of accidents in the future.
On the other hand, I believe that road security can be achieved by various affective methods without increasing the driving age. To begin with, more stringent traffic regulation should be imposed, which would play a role as a deterrent to law breakers. Additionally, to tackle the growing of driving private cars and motorbike, government should allocate financial resources to advance public transport which encourages the citizens. As a result, these residents will no longer worry about unpredictabilities they may face when driving their own vehicles, such as drunk driving or falling asleep at the wheel.
To sum up, although ascalating the legal driving age is cause of the improvement in some extent of road protection, I think that other measures discussed above need to be introduced by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...er uses his phone when driving since he know that he could easily lose concentration...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18027210884 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83520285236 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2597865355 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25794563128 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887205841807 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731579851536 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156873271118 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453790440088 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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