Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?
With the development of technology, the smart-phone users is uprising. it results less consumption of books as a tool of enjoying and seeking information. In my opinion, books will stay its role as printed articles and never be disappeared although it is considered as a less important material than before.
To begin with, reading books is better for the patients of eye problems or individuals who prefer papers to electric devices. In the beginning of e-book era, it seems to be popular for the book-worms want lighter back-pack since they always fill the bag with a bunch of books. Few years later, they felt the limitation of e-book reader machine in terms of an eye-health issue. Therefore, many of them have returned to the book shops to buy another paper-made books. Even though e-book market is trying to find the solution that enhances the panel of e-book reader for the eye health, it still has limitaiton and books which is made of paper are remaining with its role to spread knowledge.
Secondly, while people spend more leisure to watch movies or shows through television or their devices, for instance, smart phones or tablet personal computers, I believe book-reading is different kind of joy. For example, I like to lie down on the grass at a public park with my books. Smell of books whether it is new or old one makes me comfortable and retrospects memories with them. Moreover, as movies or series are sometimes based on books, it is exciting to compare two pieces of work with its point of view by their makers and visualisation what I read from books.
I am sure that despite evolution of the information technology and media entertainment, people will find the books at the end of the world as their best friend.
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uprising -> rising
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71418291368 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6175908871 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139683163349 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491413672725 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355519195315 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091655979639 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331929137479 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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