In this day and age, there are many controversies about whether it is essential that boys and girls be educated in the same schools or whether it is better for girls to achieve academic accomplishments when both genders are taught separately. While girls are believed to get rid of old-fashioned opinions for their successful pursuit of careers in homosexual schools, I believe that gender equality and relationships are enhanced if they are taught in mixed-sex schools.
On the one hand, girls have a tendency to think about opposite sexes more than boys. Researchers find out that girls usually produce a hormone called oxytocin, which makes them unable to control their thoughts about others. Therefore, homosexual schools are constructed with a view to preventing this and assisting them in focusing on their studies, which is of paramount importance and benefits their future. As a result, females are capable of pursuing their dream careers, such as being successful businesswomen. This is strikingly exemplified by Emma Watson, who is renowned for her admirable profession as a talented actress and her attempt to fight for women's rights. Therefore, she has set an example for independent women and gotten rid of old-fashioned opinions.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that girls and boys will receive a more equal education if they are taught in mixed-sex schools without discrimination. First and foremost, they can exchange the knowledge they have with one another; therefore, they can enhance their horizons in every aspect so that they all make progress together. Another significant reason for this is that they can broaden their relationships. Interacting with others makes them understand more about their peers. As a result, they boost their confidence, gain social skills, and, most importantly, create a united society in which people integrate and get along well.
In conclusion, whereas girls receive better academic achievements, I think that studying in the same schools can give them an open variety of opportunities for their holistic development, in particular their soft skills and gender equality.
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 73
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- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34821428571 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95719982836 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8788992832 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224619775779 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07907939702 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898016114287 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151442598373 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705042289068 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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