Transportation play vital role to maintain environment level of city. Additionally, some people think automobilea are greatway of moving among City , Others say , however , cycling would be preferable thing in compared to the last one . This essay will elucidate both the views along with my opinion .
To begin with , automobiles sector are booming day by day , the changes are occuring due to people are buying multiple vehicles to maintain their lifestyle , and nowdays people have less time to reach anywhere around the city also they make traveling convenient. As well as , the person who drove the car not to expose in harsh weather . Additionally , driving car is not a physically strenuous . For example , take this case to Rajasthan where temperature reach almost 60 in summers . It is such a extreme weather and impossible to take any transportation rather than a car . Moreover , car provide comfort to driver as well as more people who are traveling with them . Car are suitable for any age group people starting from 18 plus age , old people also find relaxation while , drinking the vehicle . Eventually , cars are basic need of human life in contemporary world .
Whereas , cycling suits for young individuals who want some exercise in daily life but they do not have enough time to take a break from their busy schedule so they can easily padle a cycle to his/her office , college and school as well , to exemplify , youngesters have strength to ride a bicycle from their house to end point . In addition , some environmental effects are also seen in canada where major population riding cycle for everyday purpose
In my opinion , cars are good for all age category they also modernize the new world and provide major advantages to community . Furthermore , if people use in good manner and equally use public transport for everyday activity on alternate days then automobile are also kind with nature
In conclusion , essay depicts the more advantageous of cars because it is reliable for more people rather than cycle which have least amount of pros to serve the society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72764416057 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599415204678 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.4864022521 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244258536937 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781062441635 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498181545645 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128374815444 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075157587859 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.