Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued by few people that voluntarily work would be better option for prisoners as a replacement for putting them into jail. The question is would that affect the rising of crime rate of the society? I strongly disagree with this idea in this essay I will support my arguments with example.
Firstly, it is common right of the people to get paid against the services, also sometimes society is responsible for such crimes therefore, paying less or voluntarily work would affect offenders as a result, the goal of society that is prosperous and peaceful would not achieve. For instance; it is rather effective to exploit offenders for good cause and in return they must be paid so that people get restart the circle of life once again,
On the other, prisons have been developed for the purpose of rehabilitation, therefore, there is no need of letting prisoners to do unpaid services instead they ought to be paid. For example, when you get rewarded frequently the potential increases similarly the more you appreciate the better you get results.
Moreover, the vulnerability of crime may also get shrink through counseling. Mostly youth commit crime due to lack of luxury of life. Nobody advocate them reality of life or ups and down of life, therefore, I believe that counseling would effectively reduce crime.
In conclusion, the role of paid work would get better results than unpaid community works, also, advocacy from the society is quite essential in eliminating the bad elements from society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work would affect offenders as a result, the goal of society that is prosperous a...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'advocates'.
Suggestion: advocates
...e due to lack of luxury of life. Nobody advocate them reality of life or ups and down of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03162055336 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68633420202 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7487604371 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.3 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155246469331 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506644706036 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598565252909 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853687673508 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627404747852 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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