It is a commonly held belief that changing jobs periodically which has a lot of difficulties is required and recommended to be done. Admittedly, I completely believe that it's beneficial accruing to employees are manifold owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, The most rational justification is that changing jobs give people the chance to improve their job skills and learn new technologies. Taking the initiative to obtain a better job cause that people attempt more and increase their abilities and skills to acquire a suitable occupation. Take a web developer who has to keep up to date with cutting edge technologies in this fast-changing world as an example. They should expand their knowledge and work experiences regularly thereby sticking a stable job would be prone to perennial problems.
Yet another compelling argument is job-hopping lead to extend one's relation. The more people change their job the more they become familiar with new people and increase their contacts. These connections can drive people to have a brighter job prospect and can also help them in another aspect of their life. A good illustration of this is colleagues who start their own business with each other just after a short time working together in a workplace. To put it simply, getting stuck in a job prevent staff from getting to know new people and diminished their chance to discover new ways in life and expand their horizon.
In conclusion, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that staff should change their job periodically which helps them to improve their work skills and also increase their communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended being'.
Suggestion: recommended being
...s a lot of difficulties is required and recommended to be done. Admittedly, I completely believe ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... argument is job-hopping lead to extend ones relation. The more people change their ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11678832117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87420750532 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7627211244 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188295259571 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778787611395 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498512422691 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119120081812 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250103469101 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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