Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people suggest warly education plays a key role in children's education while others disagree and propose children should wait till at least they turned seven. This esay is an attempt to discuss both views and evaluate accordingly.
In general early starters always getting an advantage in most of the scenarios. Therefore, starting the educaiton in very young age can be benifitted to a child to stay well ahead with compared to their peers. As an example, student who have done similar lessons prior to their pre-school, will perform greatly in their second time, and also they will be able to sharp subject learning and grasping abilities as a result of early education. Another advantage is children can finish their bacholars and postgraduate degrees while still being a teenager.
However, dispite all the positive effects of early education there are some drawbacks, such as immense amount of stress in every early age of the life, early school dropouts, depression and so on. When children are pre-schoolars, their cognative development significanlty afftected through activites rather than studies. Hence children should wait till certain age when they can really unedrstand subject matters withouth tourchering their brain.
In my opinion, I strongly believe that latter statement is more sensible, which is children should no shoulder any advance educational concepts. Parents must allow children's to live a happy childhood, and to achieve this goal parents should be well educated to understand what are the necessary methodologies will help to improve knowledge and advice them only subject matter alone will not brighten their kids future. A child who was pushed down this unpleasant road will be fedup sooner or later and will be endup in very bad situations.
In conclusion, when considering all the facts above there are more negative impacts on child life with the early education and parents should intellegent enough to understand this reality and their children's capacity and provide necessary education accordingly.
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Comments
1st para - warly -> early,
1st para - warly -> early, easy -> eassay
3rd para - dispite ->despite, tourchering->torturing
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... through activites rather than studies. Hence children should wait till certain age w...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld intellegent enough to understand this reality and their childrens capacity and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, however, if, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, at least, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40498442368 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71887490382 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623052959502 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9087815245 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216682474214 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745550273248 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590682946154 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122238380907 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747263141974 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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