Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities, otherwise they will waste their time.What is your opinion?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Spending free time efficiently is very e...
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... agree to people who think like that. Educational activities are very us...
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...mprovement of a childs mental skills. It is common picture that child p...
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...mes whenever he or she finds free time. It is unefficient way of spending time. Ed...
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...an prevent these kinds of bad habits. On the other hand, children can s...
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...football or other kinds of sport. All that cases mean that children do not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15254237288 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74422779167 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2389832472 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6428571429 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360260615691 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124341523428 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10788675877 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220567263235 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108895235758 0.056905535591 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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