Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion about this ?
Enterprises are thought to have advice for supplying its staff with exercises throughout the day. In my opinion, I think it should apply immediately for the companies for the following reasons.
First of all, the health of each person is extremely vital. While people do not care about it,their leaders are not aware of it. With one job, weak employees have to spend more time finishing their job, but healthy employees can work longer. Decent employees always are people who have a strength in both physical and mentals. To avoid tirement, they at least should have 30 minutes for themselves. For example, doing Yoga exercise or going jogging.
Staff’s health is also crucial for the development of companies. If employees are not in the ideal condition of health, they can not work at full capacity and the profit of the company will be affected. Seriously, these companies will be bankrupt. Nevertheless, enterprises should take care of the health of employees, especially all of the people in the company. For instance, at some tremendous companies in silicon valley like Google, staff have to spend at least 30 minutes meditating to reshape the spirit so that it can renew their mind. Subsitutely, the leader’s care also improves feelings between employees and their boss. By comprehending each other, the companies can develop rapidly, in some cases they also can overcome hardships.
In conclusion, doing exercises sometimes in the entire day working hard is one of the ways to measure many problems for many companies and it should be expanded for others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , their
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13565891473 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71650128732 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6251516987 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224510554297 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693697263649 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413177493196 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142359501616 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334826674362 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.