Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion about this?
Since people were aware of the worthy influences of being in a good physical condition on their bodies, they have been trying to be more active. But because of their work situations, they have had less amount of time to do sports. Consequently, one of the effective ways could be providing an exercising class for them while they have been in their work offices. I myself think this has been a perfect method.
Actually, although gyms have been believed as the best encouraging place to do sports, individuals could work out in other locations as well. In fact, workforces, whom have been spending much amount of their time in their workplaces, have not had many possibilities to exercise unless on weekends. So for those reasons, every business companies should allocate some time for their employees to even impose them to work out. Moreover, by offering this kind of opportunity, not only staff but also chiefs would make proceeds. In other words, this has led workers to be healthier and lessen the chances of getting sick.
On the other hand, being provided working out time for employees by companies’ managers could obtain several benefits for them, too. Because of all the positive impacts of exercising even on people’s mind, they would be able to utilize their abilities more practically. As a result, the companies’ efficiency, which has had an essential relation with how their staff’s functionality, would be so much better and higher. In addition, the supervisors could be assured by their workers which have been in a better health condition and have also been working perfectly.
In conclusion, based on writer’s view, one main system which has been extremely helpful for being in shape could be assigning training classes in work offices. Under those circumstance, not only could employees have a chance to work on both their bodies and mind, but also company’s money value would be enlarged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0786163522 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7211144457 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3399992909 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131315337362 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549442930967 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437716567963 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891962433816 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334806399849 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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