MANY CRIMES ARE RELATED TO THE COMSUMPTION OF ALCOHOL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE THE CRIME RATE IS TO BAN ALCOHOL.
DO YOU THINK THIS IS AN EFFECTIVE MEASURE AGAINST CRIME?
WHAT OTHER SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?
A numerous prisoners are linked by consuming alcoholic beverages. Prohibiting alcohol is thought to be the most effective measure to decrease the offense rate. While there are many solutions, the effect of banning alcoholic drink can be seen clearly.
It is obvious that banning alcohol is a quick way to combat crimes associated with intoxication , which often makes people unaware of their behaviors. Drinking alcoholic for example is not too incompetent, but it affect on other people or even for themselves in the future. When people drink too much beer or wine, they get drunk and they have to go home, most people can go home by themselves, every drunken person can not control their own behaviour and can make accidents. In fact, accidents made by people drinking too much are normally serious, even lethal. One typical case in Korea, an old man after intoxicating, he abused a little girl 6 years old, she was influenced seriously on both her mental and physic and having injuries in a entire her life.
However, some other measures could be implemented to remedy the negative impacts of alcohol rather than banning it. In fact, alcohol business plays an important role in some countries, prohibiting it completely is not really a functional solution. Instead, the government can allow people to drink some products having limited alcohol concentration specified by authority or even no alcohol content. In a particular survey, a group of people were tried two types of beer which had alcohol and the rest was 0% alcohol. The result was people did not realise which beer had alcohol. Additionally, after consuming booze, people do not permit themselves to drive and have to find another person to take them home.
In conclusion, it is apparent that disallowing consuming alcohol is an excellent way to decline crime rate for a while. However, in the long run, alcohol issue have to be need others solutions to be more reasonable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0092879257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72261412033 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59133126935 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.921194419 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294222817173 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103582830103 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055226871581 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191414709571 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292593556254 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.