Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country success while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure the country's success for type the sectors and among them which one is more important than others?
It is believed by some that, the economy of the nation is the most effective way to measure a country's development, whereas a group of people argue that there are many other factors, which are also essential for it. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss the various factors, which should be considered for measuring nation's success.
There are several factors to show countries progress. Firstly, literacy rate play an essential role for measuring country's progression. What I mean to say by this is that, if people are educated, then they can enable themselves to earn money in the future, which would be helpful to increase the country's economy and GDP. For example, in the USA, the majority of Americans are literate, therefore the GDP is also the highest, among all the countries around the world. It is also proven that, if literacy rate is high, then the crime rate is low, it would lead to peaceful nation.
Furthermore, another important factor is environment. By this I mean, it seems that people are happy, where pollution is low. For instance, in the Maldives the economic growth of it is low compared with other countries, but the community of it considered as the happiest around the globe. In addition, reduction in poverty level is also an important factor. In other words, if nations is able to reduce the proportion of poverty, then it shows nation are making progress, as everyone able to on money.
In conclusion, I reiterate that, the development of country based on economic growth is not appropriate away, because there are many other factors are also important, such as literacy rate, environmental conditions, and reduction in poverty levels. If I asked, I believe that literacy rate is one of the major factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76433298893 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3961412472 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295665948507 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993326826711 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614252783218 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177287845208 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674933038746 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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