Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that higher education should be paid totally by authorities, so all learners including poor people could have access to it freely. Personally, I am against this idea owing to its drawbacks that are discussed below.
It would be impossible to turn the opinion of free colleges into reality due to many reasons. The first one is that when governments lack money to update facilities at schools and conduct educational researches, the quality of education will be more likely to go down quickly. Therefore, it is necessary for authorities to charge tuition in order to maintain academic improvements. Another reason is that universities could not ask for qualified lectures because of low payments. If they are not able to earn sufficient money when doing their jobs, there would be fewer competent teachers choosing to work universities where people get educated. This might affect significantly to the future workforce in society.
At the same time, attending to tertiary education freely may prevent students from studying harder, as they do not need to worry about tuition that their parents often have to struggle to pay for. As a result, those gradually take that for granted and will not even bother learning diligently. Furthermore, individuals coming from impoverished backgrounds could get student loans and then pay them back later when starting working, which can allow them to have much motivation to try their best at schools rather than receiving free schooling. Finally, the government should not cost no fees for all students covering those who are from wealthy families since this fund would be better spend to support more underprivileged ones.
In conclusion, I disagree that going to universities needs to be completely free of charge because the value of education would suffer and it can bring about several negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8170828095 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4393423763 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193195165611 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058213849943 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044818349431 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107070377035 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390044932623 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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