Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many argue that the time youngsters spend on shopping malls is too much currently, and this trend can adversely affect the young and the community in the future. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion for some reasons.
On the one hand, young people nowadays often spend a huge amount of money in a shopping mall. One of the reasons is that they might be obsessed with buying things such as luxurious clothes or jewelry, which are expensive and not essential to spend money on. For example, many young girls are willing to pay 2000 dollars for a T-shirt that is made of a famous brand only to show it to her friends. Furthermore, the money they have spent is not what they have earned but their parents’ money. Another reason why many malls are attractive to the young is that there are a rising number of fast food restaurants in them where they sell loads of unhealthy food. Having these kinds of food for a long time contributes to the degradation of people’s health.
On the one hand, younger people has spent several hours for shopping and gathering eating in the mall centres, which is considered a waste of time. The more time they use for that kind of entertainment, the less precious time they have for other activities studying or travelling. For instance, young people often have no time doing volunteering but a greater amount of time for shopping with their friends at weekends. It is more sensible for each young individuals spending more time for their families and improving their own knowledge by reading books or learning another languages rather than wasting it in shopping malls. Society absolutely gain nothing and cannot make a progress if there are future young generations who are not hard working and lack effort into enhancing the quality of their own lives.
In conclusion, I believe that the young should spend less their time for shopping malls because it can have a negative impact on them as well as society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55620592529 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7278114274 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346159414174 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12697389737 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646872675875 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216915226645 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179102429585 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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