Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?
it is frequently believed, foreign tourists ought to be charged higher than compared to the national inhabitants when they travel across the country for visiting eminent spots. While I firmly believe, this approach brings detrimental consequences for the economy and isolates a country as well.
One negative impact of this development is that foreign travellers are not likely to visit an inflated country and endeavour to search out alternative avenues. consequently, it will badly hit the economy and poses serious threats to the revenues of the restaurants. In addition, a bunch of employees will bereft from their professions, and ultimately, they barely maintain their living standard. In Pakistan, for example, the ratio of tourist is nearly five per cent due to the optimal ticket prices of the historical places. Thus, the escalation in prices will result in the unfavourable outcomes of people and a country.
Furthermore, another point to consider is that foreign travellers play a seminal role in spreading a positive image of a nation because they act as an ambassador of their regions. Therefore, any discrimination in prices disconnected the country from the rest of the world. Even, this step would demolish the fruitful perception by negative word of mouth. As a result, a nation hardly showcases cultural values, ethos, and right key insights. However, this notion will leave unwanted effects on a country and society as a whole.
In conclusion, it is my genuine belief, a country should not have to charge over from the visitors, as it will halt the economical progression and societal interaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32818532819 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95044869609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0431686444 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199992172206 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602033662524 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058416915265 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119013396926 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562634918823 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.