Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Several of people consider if any tourists comes to another country to look magnificence of destination and civilization should be receives higher expense than original resident. I totally agree with this notion and think that every traveller must be paying more cost.
First of all, giving aid to each worker for pay tax to governvement. In other words, all of wonderful place will have a lot of people want to circulate it place because the great panorama making human interested to come. On the other hand, guard of this place should be paid to government as evidence for rent the area. For instance, Ijen crater is one of the most popular destination in Indonesia, every single person very crowded to look a good landscape of this place, original resident will be paid around 35 rupiahs and traveller should be paid onto 50 rupiahs per person, and every mounths the guard of this place must deposit the money to local government. Thats why traveller possess price more expensive because their money can help to pay off cost of land tax.
Secondly, capable to repair condition of architecture in some place. Moreover, through income from traveller will be improving the build or around the destination and making more better till everyone prefer to visit the place. Furthermore, earnings that giving from tourist very assist to renovation and adorn it district. For example, Sabang Island is one of the best Island in Indonesia, the position exactly in Aceh, every years even every months many travellers come to there to see the beautiful underwater in there with a great nature and nice people, tourist will be besought cost to snorkelling around 100 rupiahs and this cost is different from original inhabitants thats only 75 rupiahs, this money will be channeled to make purification around the beach or coastal. Thus, the island will always conserved and far from dirty place, so, everyone can comfortable with this place.
To conclude, no problem if traveller will be paid more expensive because their money very helping to increasing quality of place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
Several of people consider if any tourists comes to another country to look magnif...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...ve a lot of people want to circulate it place because the great panorama making human...
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Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... deposit the money to local government. Thats why traveller possess price more expens...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ld or around the destination and making more better till everyone prefer to visit the place...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'districts'?
Suggestion: districts
... very assist to renovation and adorn it district. For example, Sabang Island is one of t...
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Line 3, column 675, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... is different from original inhabitants thats only 75 rupiahs, this money will be cha...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'conserve'
Suggestion: conserve
...r coastal. Thus, the island will always conserved and far from dirty place, so, everyone ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01749271137 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57482768537 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.570058105 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.384615385 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170858728289 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688728539404 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532212159889 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125336912328 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763795520356 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.