Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible While others think that it should not start until 7 years of age discuss both views and give your opinion
There is a controversial discussion about which is the right age for infants to start their education. Some individuals are of the consideration that education for children should be commenced as soon as possible for their better future and beneficial for society. While others opine that it should not begin until they are seven years old because it helps out them to increase mental growth and stronger the bond with parents. Despite, the enormous benefits of start education late in life, but i believe that beginning the education in low age is more profitable for offspring to gain the more knowledge at early pace of life and become more successful. I will discuss both views in my essay.
On one side of argument there are people who argue that initiating the education at early age for children is more advantageous. The main reason for believing this is that starting traditional education b early in life is more accessible for children because the age below 6 where offspring are keen to learn the new things and at this stage of life they grasp it more quickly than adults. For instance, research carried out by Boston university in USA resulted that 90 percent of brain of children are developed at the age of 5 so this is why they are quick learners. A second point is that commencing education in early age also resulted in finish it early in life which would provide them greater career opportunities for well being and they can serve the nation for a long time span. For example, a person who completed his doctorate study at the age 21 rather than 35 age serve the society for longer period of their life
On the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing one, it is often argued that in fact education is more basic necessity for an individual to become successful in life, however people opine that education must be started late in children life to familiar them about the basic knowledge about life because in their free time they tend to learn about their culture, traditions, rituals from their parents and this can also help them to know about their innate talents. Furthermore, the bond between their parents and toddler become stronger because they spend most of their time with them and this results they can share their ins and outs with their guardians without hesitation.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however i feel that starting education at previous stage of life is more valuable in light of the fact that it gives great opportunities to both human and society. Although, learning at old age beneficial to a number of extent as it tighten the bond between parents and children to light up the infants general knowledge, commencing the education at younger age is more imperative due to the fact it provides inner satisfaction and advantageous for nation for longer period of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and advantageous for nation for longer period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 494.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81376518219 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5807231761 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463562753036 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.792300543 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.857142857 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2857142857 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261895211923 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113122219689 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522641551392 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181764274989 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101166234152 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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