Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so the medical service should not be run by profit making companies.Do you think the disadvantages of the private Healthcare outweigh the advantages.
Undoubtedly, no one can deny the role of health some people think that good fitness is elementary of human need. However, many people say that some private association run their own medical service and they are always making profit by and by this these types of companies override the advantages of State health Care. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why medical service run by private health care and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the superiority of state healthcare system. One of the main positive point is that State medical centre, good health should be given to everyone for free. What mean by this is that State medical centre run by government and they do not charge for health checkup and it is easy and convenient for people whether they are poor,rich and middle class. Secondly everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment by social healthcare.
Moreover nowadays government provide many kind of facilities to people, such as the person who is above the 60 years then government provide aayushman card which access in all the private and State health care and because of this patient get all the medical issues free and their charge paid by government.
Turning to the other side of the argument is that private healthcare is unfair which means only wealthy residents can afford personal healthcare. This often lead to money making trap. And other issue is that privy medical care always run for their business expansion and making money by using name of modern facilities, advanced technological equipment and many more.
to sum up, personally, I believe the benefit in terms of State health care, because today's health clinic paid by the government using money from impost. Eventually, this is outweigh the profit making medical service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99348534202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45864693967 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2885229189 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297676509494 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107740748317 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812038714627 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154362881881 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112055023352 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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