*Topic*
Food can produced much more cheaply because of improved fertilized and better machinery. however, some of the method used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Although,many people believe that nowadays food can generate much more inexpensive due to improved compost and advanced machinery.As well as some methods have negative impact on humans life's.I think in a reverse manner and disagree to the given statement.My inclination is justified in my following paragraphs.
Out of all the arguments,the strongest one prove my view is people's health have significantly being suffering from these new technological invention. This is to say that nowadays more advanced technology things are available in market to preserve food and these gadgets are run by many harmful gases.A good example for this is refrigerator.Beside this it is also true that more farmers use chemical compost to grow food faster and due to this people suffer from many diseases such as cancer,asthma and manymore.
On the contrary some people counter claim that mention support.The foremost argument,they do is scientist discovered new dungs for farmers that certainly help them in coultivation and it will make growing process faster.Moreover, price of food has decreased due to less time and less effort and as a result mankind's purchase more food for the same amount of money.While they are unaware from these things they usually by the food from their delicious taste and low-price.Which is directly harm their health.
Thus,to rap up the discussion,it can be said that people are using upgraded machine and new chemical fertilizers which make time saving process and costly but in many ways they things are unsafe for us and this type of foods make us unhealthy,also our life of age will automatically decrease by consuming hybrid foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13768115942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69789868599 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9887245528 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181721893697 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062258610393 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504727948839 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110537615515 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038492852672 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.