When families have a meal together it is considered social activity do you think eating together is important in your country?
Undoubtedly, no one can deny the role of social vitality which done by families on dinner table by taking chow at the same time with whole family.Also it has great influence over the generation.However, there is belief in the society that people of our country eating together and it is a influential for us and our nation.Hereby, I am going to shed light on both views in the following paragraphs.
On the factor of inclination, there are multiple factors to support,today's families are not big as a compared to the past and duet to this today's generation's people like to live as a nuclear family to live life as per their desire.While families have feed jointly they are easily connected with each other's and share their routine activities with each other's. Another factor that attract is that they always concern for their future life and deal with upcoming things and this type of conversation only do on the dining table,because this is the only time when family sit together after their busy schedule. Generally, people call the meall time as a family time.
Furthermore, when families get meal together children on chance to demand for something essential for the study also they get time for discussion related to school tuition.If offspring pose their problem in front of their parents than parents gain call opportunities to grant them advice how to solve the difficult issue and enhance their self confidence. Due to all these things families get more location to get stronger and maintain happy environment in home.
To summarise and give my opinion.I would say that eating together is significant for members of family as it does not only give strength to relationship bond but also give opportunity to nearest and dearest to share their happiness,problems, experience and all day activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04983388704 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97663665563 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.990631959 49.4020404114 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.142857143 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189509440767 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793891650366 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299160904747 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105101177404 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186959129888 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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