Some people think children's spending time on TV video and PC games is good.While others think it is bad.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, no one can deny the role of offspring , who mostly expenditure their time on watching TV video and computer games is it as great influence over the server people.However, there is belief an argument in the society that it is a wrong impression on children's.Hereby, I am going to shed light on both views in the following paragraphs.
On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support that adolescents are in their leisure time they usually spending time on many technological items. The foremost reason is that today's progeny deal with modern concept of technology, also some children's due to this gain big achievement for their future life.Another factor that attract is by watching TV they learns new thing also gain knowledge of world. Besides, this the children of present life widely play PC games such as pubg and many more, because of it they are make expertise in-game and nowaday's this type of games provide extra ordinary future for them, also in future offsprings are capable to develop their own games.
On the contrary, the later you suggest that watching too much TV and online videos adolescents are exhausted.As a they are never play outdoor activities also they isolated from family, friends and many more. Beside this adolescents has addiction of PC game, new trending videos and it is bad for them, because they less socialized with people, their mindset is not mentally stable and they are create violence.In short adolescents has musculoskeletal disorder.
To summarise and gives my opinion, I would say that current technology has their own advantages and disadvantages, but we have to understand that how to use this technology in our life and this is the most ideal way to deal with situations.
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and the protection is waste of resources.To what extend do you agree or disagree ? 56
- Countries become more developed due to mix of different people and their culture Do you agree or disagree 82
- When families have a meal together it is considered social activity do you think eating together is important in your country? 67
- In many countries,the proportion of olde people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society ? 73
- *Topic*Food can produced much more cheaply because of improved fertilized and better machinery. however, some of the method used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. To what extent do you agree or 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y, no one can deny the role of offspring , who mostly expenditure their time on wa...
^^
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... great influence over the server people.However, there is belief an argument in the soc...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hereby
...t it is a wrong impression on childrens.Hereby, I am going to shed light on both view...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a wrong impression on childrens.Hereby, I am going to shed light on both views i...
^^
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ragraphs. On the face of statement, there are multiple factors to support th...
^^
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ical items. The foremost reason is that todays progeny deal with modern concept of tec...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Another
...n big achievement for their future life.Another factor that attract is by watching TV ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture life.Another factor that attract is by watching TV they learns new thing als...
^^
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...or that attract is by watching TV they learns new thing also gain knowledge of world....
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...online videos adolescents are exhausted.As a they are never play outdoor activitie...
^^
Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'they'?
Suggestion: a; they
...ine videos adolescents are exhausted.As a they are never play outdoor activities also ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...cents are exhausted.As a they are never play outdoor activities also they isolated ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... never play outdoor activities also they isolated from family, friends and many m...
^^
Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...m family, friends and many more. Beside this adolescents has addiction of PC game, n...
^^^^
Line 9, column 396, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...set is not mentally stable and they are create violence.In short adolescents has muscu...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...lly stable and they are create violence.In short adolescents has musculoskeletal d...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, in short, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04810996564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89468253798 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5081140474 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 209.857142857 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5714285714 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159319306003 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728592679828 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231234067999 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089688244776 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246396976138 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.